Cute and the story flowed alright
My only qualm with this was the inconsistency in the animation, which in retrospect may have been part of the style you animate with. The characters just moved a little to jerkily for my liking.
Cute and the story flowed alright
My only qualm with this was the inconsistency in the animation, which in retrospect may have been part of the style you animate with. The characters just moved a little to jerkily for my liking.
Laughable, in a good way
Funny stuff, broseph
Not what I was expecting
A fair homage to the earlydays of cartooning and slightly updated too.
I felt the timing was a little awkward at various points, but overall this is a good piece of work.
Wow
Rather incredible. Loved the art as much as i did the awesome plot.
Touching
As you said, the animation could have been a bit better, but it didn't detract too much from the message of the piece. Nice work
3 minutes animated in less than a week, hehehe xD
Glad you liked it otherwise~~ =)
Original
Great animation, great voice work, just great all around.
Thanks!
Needs Work
The voice work was decently annoying and the animation was lazy at best.
The drawings weren't exactly bad, but the tweening just gave it all a jumbled feeling when it moved.
On the subject of movement, It was a very still and boring animation job. The characters were flat and non-expressive. Which, when compounded with annoying voice work, was just bad.
You've got a long way to go, but keep trying. You could probably make a decent animation if you put more time into it (which as you said in the description, had limits in this case).
<3
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